Peanut Butter - Comments

That was really good.
I really wish this wasn't a one-shot.
Flowed well, colourful.
"But forgiving the only person you allow yourself to love, it becomes a habit, a terrible one."
~I can personally relate to that, it spoke volumes.

Great job Jayc(:

Nice one Jaycie =3

Hi just a little mention, I loved the story and I am in the contest too! So goodluck to you. :)
But on the summary page, the first picture you have, is far out of line and proportion. :) Just letting you know. :D I love the story line!!

Nice.
I liked the use of flashbacks and how you inserted the quote into the story. The idea you had was really good and I liked the way you expressed it. Good job with the lack of spelling and grammar errors. It was refreshing to see that.
Good luck.

Also good luck with the contest, and you can change anything in your story up until November 6th.

I really liked how you wrote this. You know, with all of the flash backs. It made me feel like I was there.