That was really good. I really wish this wasn't a one-shot. Flowed well, colourful. "But forgiving the only person you allow yourself to love, it becomes a habit, a terrible one." ~I can personally relate to that, it spoke volumes.
Hi just a little mention, I loved the story and I am in the contest too! So goodluck to you. :) But on the summary page, the first picture you have, is far out of line and proportion. :) Just letting you know. :D I love the story line!!
Nice. I liked the use of flashbacks and how you inserted the quote into the story. The idea you had was really good and I liked the way you expressed it. Good job with the lack of spelling and grammar errors. It was refreshing to see that. Good luck.
I really wish this wasn't a one-shot.
Flowed well, colourful.
"But forgiving the only person you allow yourself to love, it becomes a habit, a terrible one."
~I can personally relate to that, it spoke volumes.