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  • CallMeKayla

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    Thank you everyone! And ToastAndJam, I saw the illistrations in my mind as well. :D Thank you sooo much!!!
    October 4th, 2009 at 08:22am
  • MaCherieAmour

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    Cool story. If I was 8 I would be jumping for joy. Keep writing.
    October 4th, 2009 at 12:48am
  • ToastAndJam

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    Very cute. I think this would look spectacular in a book with pictures. Seriously, I kept imagining a picture book for this story while I was reading. I think it concluded a bit too easily, but then again isn't that the children book way?
    October 4th, 2009 at 12:31am
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    There should be more children stories on here. It's basically all romance, with the occasional exception. I like this, keep writing.
    October 4th, 2009 at 12:30am
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