A Way To Get Lost In You - Comments

  • SomewhereLifeIsGood

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    I love how cheesy it is. And all the confusion between the characters is just, well... it just makes me want to scream at the screen haha

    This is pretty great, and it was well explained, you do have a couple of errors, but it doesn´t take off how great it is :)

    I LOVE Three Days Grace and A7X, so this amazing ;)
    October 4th, 2010 at 06:44am
  • flyer.

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    Wow. Wow wow wow. This story...fit together so perfectly. I admit, around halfway through I thought the plot was kinda cliche....but by the time I got to the end I had changed my mind. Both because you made it really not cliche...and because the writing was so excellent, I didn't really mind. I actually wanted the cheesy ending, because you made me care about the characters so much. Nice job!
    October 4th, 2010 at 04:00am
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    *sigh* This would've been so much better with an unhappy ending - mostly because I'm a sucker for them.
    Don't get me wrong though, I did really enjoy the way you wrote this :)
    It's a nice story, full of emotion, longing, passion - all that great stuff.
    I think you did an amazing job.
    August 2nd, 2010 at 09:34pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    Cheesy or not that was a cute ending.
    I had to go back and read the first paragraph twice because I thought my eyes were playing tricks on me.
    I definitely loved this story.
    Abby and Matt went through a lot of heartache and pain, but I'm happy that they worked things out in the end.
    November 9th, 2009 at 10:01pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    That was so great.
    I feel so bad for Matt though.
    I wish he would just talk to Abigail and get things straightened out.
    They need each other.
    Why did Matt invite Jenna over anyway?
    October 19th, 2009 at 11:12pm
  • MarriahShadz

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    Kate...this was so...awesome.
    I am just at a loss for words right now.
    You have me speechless.
    October 8th, 2009 at 06:53am
  • bloodravyn

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    this is amazing so far
    i can see why she would get the wrong idea, that's a hard sale and all
    October 4th, 2009 at 07:05am