Ah! (: I love this story. But I'm relatively sure that Lana's crazy. Whether you meant her to be or not, she just is. O_O Annnnd! I'm a perv, so I'd really like if you wrote out their next adventure in David's bedroom. :D
Always a fan of the idea of Stockholm Syndrome. No one ever takes it to the correct point, though. I really enjoy the personality you've given David. He's a kidnapper, and he isn't allowing anyone to forget it. Pretty realistic, with S.S. case. I'm excited for more.x
But I'm relatively sure that Lana's crazy. Whether you meant her to be or not, she just is. O_O Annnnd! I'm a perv, so I'd really like if you wrote out their next adventure in David's bedroom. :D