nice! maybe the girl will become a vampire! then thomas will love her! they fall in love! and all that crap! or... the girl can die! thomas is a bloodthirsty vampire! and the world is free of preps! ... i like choice 2 actually!
Dude! I think it's really good so far! I'm a BIG vampire fan sooo... I'll probably read this story a lot! Man... if I was attacked by a vampire... first thing I'd do would be... what? I have NO idea! Cool story though!
It was super short, but you show some good descriptions.....which i like. so keep it up and maybe make them a bit longer yeah? feel free to ask me any questions or whatever. i'm viatrix by the way.
It was super short, but you show some good descriptions.....whcich i like. so keep it up and maybe make them a bit longer yeah? feel free to ask me any questions or whatever. i'm viatrix by the way.
October 5th, 2009 at 01:49am
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