The Love Story - Comments

I really like this. It seems like it's going to be really good. I would just suggest looking into having someone as a co-writer/editor it comes in handy especially when there are tiny gramatical mistakes. I have a co-writer and having her helps out a lot especially as my story progressed and I needed ideas and stuff. But like I said I think this story is going to be pretty awesome. Keep it going! :)

Yeah, I think it's really good. Other than a few grammatical errors it's a good story. Continue, I'd like to see where you go with this. =] Well done!