AHHHHH i just found this today & i read it straight through it was so amazing!!!!!!!!! i love love love that her & sharp are together! *squeal* lol off to read the sequel now :D <3
I can't believe this is over. I like the little bird on you shoulder too. LOL I think every one was shocked at your ending. I'm not going to lie, the thought of being in a closet with Sharpie...well lets just say it's a good thought. LOL
WOW I had a feeling Sharpie was gonna bust in there but I didn't think they were gonna get married and have kids! Shoocker, definatly though Jon was the husband until the end and I was so confused like "what, what, what?????" Can't wait for the sequal!!!
OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! She married Sharpie and is having his baby!!?!?!?! WHAT! Was the first thing that came into my mind when...omg, I can't even formulate a freakn sentence! I thought it was Tazer in the closet with her...is it weird that I'm completely shocked? Anyways...I think you should write another chapter explaining the night where Jon proposed and show like how things went down after Sharpie I'm guessing said no.
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I wanted Jonny to be her husband!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :(
Oh well. I still think its a great story. I like that her and Jonny have a solid relationship but ya.........:) Oh well, this means Jonny is mine!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Buahahahaaha :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P Loved the ending chapter, it was adorable :) :) :) :D :D :D: P :P: P And I would love a sequel :) Of course, I just hope that Jonny stays single so I can claim him buahahaha!!!!!!!!!!! hehe....*nervous giggle*
But seriously, I loved this story and really hope you do a sequel. I loved the ending even though it wasn't what I expected. But I love Sharpie too :) :D :P Love it, love it, love it :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P
Was seriously confused about what was going on until the last paragraph.
Jordan’s eyes met Jonathan’s and they were happy for them. Truly happy. Not the fake happy that he had been when Jordan and Sharpie had begun their relationship. But that had been two years ago and in that time things had changed.
I would definitely read a sequel and want to read about a baby Sharpie and how Damon interacts with his new brother/ sister. So glad she got together with Sharpie in the end and she doesn't have a bad relationship with Jon.
I'm gonna be completely honest until the last line i was CONFUSED AS HELL. i couldn't figure out what happened btw her and jon & sharpie. but i'm very happy with the way it turned out and REALLY hope you make a sequel.....
I liked the way it ended. It was definatley unexpected. I was thinking in the closet it was Jon and before that when he said loves you mommy like Damon I took it as they were married just like when you said they had a solid relationship. I really liked the twist though and think you should do a sequel!!! And does this mean it was Sharpie who said no at the end of the last one?
Wow! He just pops the freakin question like no tomorrow! I have a feeling it's partrick that says no, seeing as he was going on how he doesn't have to be the biological father to be a father... or something along the lines of that =P Hmmm I have no idea if I want Jordan to marry Jonny or not, he seems to be an ass, then be nice, then be stupid, and it's all a confusing cycle, but we'll see! loved this chapter <3 can't wait for more