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  • anna;

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    So this was really cute. :)

    I loved how he stopped her from doing it. It was passionate and sweet.

    I hope you do well in the contest. :)
    October 26th, 2009 at 06:21pm
  • cruciatus.

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    I really enjoyed reading this. Other than a few grammatical errors (which we all make, so it doesn't bother me) there was nothing wrong with it. It was easy to read and understand, and I appreciated the ending, where Ryan stopped her from taking her life. It does the song justice. XD Good luck. I'll let you know the results of the contest when everyone has submitted their entries.
    October 7th, 2009 at 12:56am
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