Sweet story and you used the color plus the emotion very well!! There are a few grammer/spelling mistakes (for instance: I believe you said conceded instead of conceited... I may be mistaken of course.), but overall good job!
Here's a hug for being awesome~! *hugs*
November 28th, 2009 at 05:10am
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