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  • Tasssshhh

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    Jesus christ.
    I know exactly why you won that contest. I'm absolutely and utterly in love.
    It was just the perfect mix of description and dialogue to draw you into the story. I genuinely felt like i was in the airport watching the scene unfold. Man, i just feel like i'm back from a long trip lol!
    Well done.
    You deserved to win! x
    November 4th, 2009 at 09:30pm
  • HopefulRissa

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    Emily.
    Not only is this going to be hard to beat in the contest, your main character is the same girl that I used for Savanna in Chasing Chaos. I am totally stunned over these two things.
    October 26th, 2009 at 12:13am
  • formerlyknownas

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    Oh. My. God.
    That was beautiful. Adorable. Fucking brill, idek what else to say.
    And you portrayed the quote so well! That's exactly what I was looking for, I mean you got it perfect.
    Gold stars for you, mama.
    And now I'm going to be having daydreams about a certain Sykes brother ALL DAY LONG. Hahaha.
    October 10th, 2009 at 08:00pm
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