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  • imperfectromance

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    YES! FINALLY, GOD! OHMYGODDD. They kissed :D They made out. They basically had friggen mouth sex in her living room. I love you for writing this. I love this story, absolutely adore it. I think I'mma go screaming down my street not.

    teamjohnftw<3
    January 23rd, 2010 at 05:09am
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    (: lovedd itt~!
    January 23rd, 2010 at 05:06am
  • iwishiwas

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    (: lovedd itt~!
    January 23rd, 2010 at 05:06am
  • precursors

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    OH. MY. CHIZ. (Did I really just say chiz? Guess so.)

    John and Reese kissed!!! (made out.. same thing XD)
    Though I love Kenny just the same, I'm uber happy right now :)
    January 23rd, 2010 at 04:56am
  • bitterxperfume

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    i adore this story. I always like reading believable fan fiction
    January 18th, 2010 at 10:01am
  • nopejustnope

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    do you enjoy torturing me?
    because you do it often, way too often.
    :(
    please, please, please update soon.
    January 18th, 2010 at 05:46am
  • cynicalqueen

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    Oh Clary, what have you gotten yourself into now... haha. I'm actually kind of freaked to find out what happens next. Freaked in a good way though, if that makes any sense.
    January 16th, 2010 at 11:25pm
  • Lady.Orion

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    Guess 20 mins wasn't enough. I was left with not knowing the ending of it all through school today. Like two paragraphs couldn't have driven me any crazier. xD
    I'm not going to say anything on Clary's front. I don't know what I think atm.

    Next chapter, por favor. (:
    January 16th, 2010 at 04:55pm
  • Much Better

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    Oh Clary, hahahhaha.
    I love her, she makes this story so good. :]
    January 16th, 2010 at 09:27am
  • plastic heart;

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    wow. i cannot wait to see what happens next.
    i'm excited (big kev's voice) bahahaha.
    John, John, John...why'd you second guess yourself there, you know Reese would hit her sister, even if she reminds you of a wild animal when she's royally pissed. But hitting Clary, she would never, but after this I HOPE SHE DOES. Clary has a weird/seducing way of doing things and maybe she's trying to help her sister out, yeah i get that, but she could use a less dramatic/seducing way of doing it, maybe then she wouldn't be so hated. if she just found other ways then the ones she has, she might be able to have actual friends and maybe a boyfriend, but wait we're talking about Clary, i don't think she could ever change her ways. anyway this has been an awesome update, and i cannot wait til the next one, remember I'M EXCITED. lol.
    January 16th, 2010 at 03:40am
  • lovely youth

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    Great chapter.

    I really want Clary to go mind her own business. She's really starting to annoy me. I mean, now she has to go and crush on John? Or whatever it is she's feeling.
    January 16th, 2010 at 03:35am
  • imperfectromance

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    Gah. I hate Clary, but then I like her. Like, to me, in this chapter, she was just trying to wake Reese up, to see that John was there for and much more amazing than Kennedy. But in others, it's like she just wants him in her bed. So, I'm really torn when it comes to the characters in this story (Reese, because she WON'T see that John is so much better than Kennedy. Clary, because she's trying to get Reese to stop being such a fool.) And your writing is just lovely <3 :]
    January 15th, 2010 at 11:08pm
  • iwishiwas

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    ooooh cliff hangerr
    January 15th, 2010 at 09:40pm
  • cantcontainit

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    fsjflkajskfjaskjfaj!
    January 15th, 2010 at 07:46pm
  • am0rtentia

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    Maaaaan, Clary's the pure meaning of a BITCH.
    This was fierce! ;D

    <3
    January 15th, 2010 at 06:35pm
  • Zombie.Highway

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    Well this is an interesting turn of events. I'm not sure if Reese deserves John just like Clary believes, though I wouldn't go through all the trouble Clary is to ruin her life. Good chapter!!! And my favorite character is John, because he is a good friend, he is concerned and he is comforting. He is very genuine and he really shows his emotions unlike all the other characters.
    January 15th, 2010 at 05:13pm
  • precursors

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    ...I call hitting Clary with a frying pan. I gots dibs.

    Okay, I know she's obsessed with John, but did she really have to say Reese hit her when she knew that would never happen? And what if he didn't believe her?

    I would loveeeeeeeee to get on the AOL/AIM chat but I have school. In like, 5 minutes I have to leave. >:(
    January 15th, 2010 at 01:10pm
  • screamedlullaby

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    clary... that. cow.
    i understand her psyche i guess.
    but she's still a complete and UTTER cow.
    i want to throttle her.
    and reese a little bit.
    but jeezus.
    anyway, well written and interesting as usual.
    update SOON
    i dont have AOL but feel free to send me parts of the upcoming chapter ;)
    January 15th, 2010 at 12:31pm
  • pixiesticks650

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    "Reese was a fool. Clary would make her see that. It would hurt, leaving her to be the lonely one, but she would do it and maybe get something out of it."

    So now I'm confused. Because after that sentence, I was under the impression that Clary was manipulatingJohn to get him to talk to Reese again, and help them work things out. Maybe get them into a relationship. But everyone else's comments seem to be calling Clary a bitch, still? So, uh...am I missing something?

    (Also where she admits nothing would happen between her and John, and she isn't trying to seduce him anymore?:
    " She placed two chaste open mouthed kisses to his neck—his body tensed against hers and he flinched away from her—a goodbye to something that would never have happened.")
    January 15th, 2010 at 12:28pm
  • crossed out name.

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    THAT LITTLE SKANK.
    I swear, if J-dog falls for that bullshit, I'm going to scream. Or maybe Kyle just won't get junk-punched in Wanted.
    Tell me, what would I have to do to get you to post 20 already? I have a good chunk of Life written, I could send you that for an update. But if that doesn't cut it, hell, idk what would.
    I don't even know what to say, Alex. Boo. Clary is a little skank and I'm really, really displeased that's she's stooped this low. Although not surprised, sadly. I was just hoping you WOULDN'T do this, which of course you did anyway. You really must update this again, okay?
    January 15th, 2010 at 11:36am