Animal I Have Become - Comments

ARE YOU FREAKING KIDDING ME?!
Damon must not die woman!
And how the hell is Alec alive?!
Wasn't he staked?!
Gaahhh!
Update quickly missy!!

DUDE!
What in the world just happened?
Is she dead?
Was she turned completely?
WHAT HAPPENED?!
You must update missy.

Okay, Im back from the cruise so I can FINALLY keep reading. Here goes....
OME BELLA TURN GOOD ALREADY! KILL ARO AND JANE AND ALL THE FREAKIN' PEOPLE WHO ALWAYS HAVE ANNOYING GRINS ON THEIR FACES!!!! AAAAAHHHH!!!!!! MAKE EDWARD AND BELLA BE TOGETHER AGAIN AND GET JAOB AND NESSIE TOGETHER AGAIN, TOO!
AAAAHHHH!!!!!
PLEASE not two or three more chapters! Atleast 5? Lol
I had a freak out (as ALWAYS)! xDD Please update as soon as possible!!! xD ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥♥

Oh shiz, what's going to happen?
Leo better get there soon-ish.
=D
BUT NESSIE BETTER NOT DIE!

Nice! Finally Bella got her act together...at least I hope so! And aw Edward cried! Love it!

Great! I loved this last one.
I'm waiting on more :3

If you don't wanna end it... then what about making a part two?
Or something like that..

Nice Work!

-Reddie

I hate Jane. She really creeps me out

Dont end it! I love it too much!! :'( sob!!

Awesome, update soon please?!

OMG! U r my Goddess!!!! I saw this while i was browsing through Fan-Fictions and i started reading it. I loved it!!!!!!!! I cant wait for u to finish it! Plz, keep up the great work!!!! :DDD

Hm, in a happily ending story - Bella would get back with Eddie-ward and they would kill every one of the guard and Nessie wouldn't join the Volturi; letting them all live happily ever after.

But in a not so happily ending story - Bella kills Eddie, and then there would be nothing really to stop the inevitable.

Except for one thing!

LEO! Yay - I love that kid, he always changes things up =D

AAAHHHH!! Don't let her join! She gotta stay with Jacob!! XD Stay stay stay!! :) Update!! lol

Okay so my projections include Nessie joining the Vulturi against her will (and the rest of her family's will, leading them to create some weird escape plan that shouldn't work because its the vulturi but will be successful because this is your story and what you say goes!!) Her padre might be able to convince Bella to help Nessie, but it will be too late, and then somewhere in there Bella will be freakishly excited that they finally got Nessie to join the Vulturi, and even though Nessie will hate being with them and drinking human blood (but its yummy to her so she will do it) she will have her mother and that will sort of make it okay. This is where the story ends!! Now I'm going to laugh really hard at myself if my conjectures are completely wrong, or if I was right and you change them just to mess with me :) Either way keep up the awesome writing!!!

Ahhh, good way to end the chapter! xD

And ehh... your welcome?
Good job.

And YAYYY more Edward ;P

-Reddie

i forbid her from joinging them.

Thats cruel!
Even more cruel than what I'm doing in Dance in the Dark!
Meeeaaaaannnn!
Hahaa.
Loved it.
Update soon hun!!
(:

Oh my god, i love it, update soon?!?!?!

I have some liking for this story.
I've read all that you have posted.

However, there are some parts I hate.

One hate Damon >.>
Two most of the time I hate Nessie she's a brat, I did however like her when this first started.

Carlisle has a son? ...But... that kind of messes with The Twilight Saga.. I mean, I know this is fanmade, BUT it is half based off of Twilight, ya know?

Pretty much the only thing, what kept me reading was not only Edward, but the way he is with Nessie, it's really sweet.

Another thing that you messed with was one of the most inportant parts about Twilight. Bella, you changed her so much! I liked when it start and she was ''Dead''

One of the reasons why, your story bothered me so much was, because you wrote it so well, it felt like I was reading ... Well a new Twilight book at first :/

Now I'm not so sure.
I'll keep reading, and commenting and I really do hope I like this.

Team Edward xD < 3

-Reddie

Interesting story. Im falling in love with it. :)

AAAH!!!! I READ CH.55!!! AAAAAHHHH!!! I CAN'T BELIVE IT!
RUN NESSIE! RUN TO JACOB!!!! AAAAHH!!!!! Teehehee
Please update as soon as you can? I hadn't read cuz I forgot to subscribe hahaha.