Wow, Gerard is an ass.... Mikey's so cute, aww I can't believe he was going to get bashed up :[ I hope he finds someone nice :P I'm so proud of London for sticking up for him.. That was nice :D UPDATE SOOOOON!
Chapter 2: I liked this also London is awesome, she sounds like someone I'd be friends with... I wish Jen was my aunt... By the sounds of it, I need to buy a cardigan like hers.. Yes, random but true! Damn butterfly, I wish someone could make insect repellent for the insides... Dang, you better be writing the next chapter I'm excited for Gerard's appearance!! Update Soon <3
Chapter 1: I like it, I like the sound of the London character... I wish I had green eyes... You know who has nice green eyes, as much as I'd hate to say it but yeah... Claire.. I like the way you've written this.. Ready to read chapter two despite my distractions.. GOOD WORK KELSEY!