ouuuu!!!! PAGE CLAIM!!!!! hahahaaa i stole your comment virginity!!! hahaaaa
this story is good.. it needs a little brushing up on the grammar and stuff but other than that, you're okay! haaa
maybe read a little more.. find more like idk... slang styles of writing lol... how do gangsters talk.. no no.. not singapore gangsters.. hahaa... real gangsters... ones that you can understand! hahaa...
this story is good.. it needs a little brushing up on the grammar and stuff but other than that, you're okay! haaa
maybe read a little more.. find more like idk... slang styles of writing lol... how do gangsters talk.. no no.. not singapore gangsters.. hahaa... real gangsters... ones that you can understand! hahaa...
anywho! keep it up! you have only one chapter!