A Vampires Story - Comments

This is awesome; Loved it! (:
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doomhell50: I am aware that the name lucian is the same, but lucian is a common name, or somewhat a common name. My inspiration comes from all the films and series I have seen of vampires, and therefore make it my own. The underworld stuff in my story has nothing to do with werewolfs and is just a small comunity of vampires that won't follow the rules of the vampire community. Underworld or underground community is also a common way of refering to a small part of a bigger community. They don't exactly have the copyrights for the names that they use in a movie, because most of the names is common or is fetched from somewhere else.
I do however appriciate you commenting on the story, and pointing this out (: I am glad you liked it though.

uhm your first opening underworld and lucian.... this is actually a movie and a character.... your practically taking their ideas as your own? well baseing their ideas for your own... you might want to change that one part other than that its really good.

FABTASTIC!(:

THis is pretty amazing. I love the whole concept. I can't wait to see if you sumbit anymore chapters to this story. I would have had no idea this was one of your first stories had you not said so in you comments, this is really good.

This first chapter is really good. I would be more than happy to read more once you write them (if you are, that is..).
But anyways, its really good(: