Hey chickie! I'm so glad that you updated, and that you are feeling a little better! D xD Nate is so adorable, he seems to have ADD, he just moves from subject to subject! N'aww but it is so like Nate with his loyalty to the band and to Gabe, it just makes him more amazing. Oh, and Gabe and Aria are so effin' cute! It almost makes me want them to be together, but I'm still rooting for She-bang she-bang Suarez! I would write more about how much I adore this story but I'm writing on my iPod and it's kinda hard! But amazing job, Hun, it's amazing! <3
Well howdee there Missy. I am very very excited about this story, I can't wait to read more. I read on your page that you would rather get constructive feedback than stupid gushing so I'll give it a shot;
You have a great story line, I really like the way that it is progressing quickly, but just keep an eye out for more detail. We need to "feel" like we are in the story. Um, apart from that it is doing wonderful and I am totally subscribing!
xD Nate is so adorable, he seems to have ADD, he just moves from subject to subject! N'aww but it is so like Nate with his loyalty to the band and to Gabe, it just makes him more amazing. Oh, and Gabe and Aria are so effin' cute! It almost makes me want them to be together, but I'm still rooting for She-bang she-bang Suarez! I would write more about how much I adore this story but I'm writing on my iPod and it's kinda hard! But amazing job, Hun, it's amazing! <3