Ghost. - Comments

Wow, this was amazing.
The last two paragraphs made me sad, though, but that's the mark of a good writer. ;D
It was beautifully written, too.

oooh this is good!! I loved it XD its so original

First off, I'd like to thank you for entering the contest. It means a lot, especially since not a lot of people got their entries in on time. :(

I love how you started this piece. It immediatly got me wondering what exactly happened, especially since you implied that there's some kind of secret between Gerard and Mikey or such. I'm always a sucker for well-written love triangles.

That was beautiful. I honestly didn't expect Gerard to be a ghost and I feel so much for Frankie. We can't control who we love but still... I am curious as to why they both decided to kill themselves on their 18th birthday. I was a little confused throughout the oneshot but when you mentioned that Gerard was a ghost, it made a lot more sense. Thanks for entering!

Wow. Your mind I swear thinks up ideas that professional writers would focus an entire novel on, and you manage to get your thoughts across in just a few paragraphs of beautifully chosen words.
Frank seems so confused ad guilty. I love his contemplation on fate and how he ruined his own and Mikey's by choosing the wrong brother. You really presented what could be a confusing concept, in a way that made it flow. I'm impressed xx

:(
They died.
-crys manically-
Now I want to know WHY they killed themselves, Knowing me, I wouldv'e jumped off the bridge on my 18th too. :P

This is pretty good.
Sad, but I liked it.