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  • cry me a river

    cry me a river (100)

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    i like it when people don't write about sunshine and rainbows, nice story.
    November 26th, 2009 at 02:50am
  • Crazysabby

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    creepy.. but i liekd it :)
    October 12th, 2009 at 10:22pm
  • for the birds

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    That was really good! It was a very interesting idea. I figured purple would be one of the harder colors, but you used it very well. Aside from a couple of places where commas should've been used, I didn't notice very many grammar eras. Good job. (:
    October 10th, 2009 at 05:24pm
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