Don't Need These Other Pretty Faces, Like I Need You - Comments

wow! keep it up :)

this is really good :) write more

I like it. :)

I've been following your story and have something to say (but I hate being mean):

In my perspective, your story is very cliche. It's too predictable.
You might want to rethink where you are going with this and add a tad more emotion, alright?

OMG i love it! Ugh I want to punch jonny in the face! he is a d*khead!
cant wait for the next update!

Watch your grammar.
Then [we couldn't do it then.] - Than [im better than you]
Too [too much] - To [go to]
Their [it was their ball] - There [over there]- They're [they're smart.]

great job so far. =]

I like This So Far But I Would Work On The Way You Use Word... I've Noticed Sometimes you mean to words like 'knew' but Spell it 'new' Or Other Things Other Than That It's REALLY GOOD more soon Ya?

I dislike her mum
Keeping her away from him..

I really like who you chose to write about, but try and make this a little different than stories you've read, alright?

I'll subscribe and be your toughest critic.

GOOD YOU SHOULD BE HAHA>
Look at my story ayy?
if you don't mind>?

LOVE IT