After the Fall - Comments

I really love this story. When I say I love it, I don't mean it in a light way like "I love shoes". No. This story has emotional ups and downs and there were plenty of curveballs thrown. I honestly can't get enough of this. I don't know if your even going to update this story anymore and that really makes me sad :( I really hope you do. I am genuinely upset that I just read the last chapter of "After The Fall". Please Please Please don't stop writing :)

Love Forvever,
Jessica

Awwwwww
Pleas don't tell me this is the end?!
I love this story soo much
Aww Mason and the baby that was cute
damn it Kina for being hard headed but I can understand why she doesn't want to do anyhtign yet
Clara

Holy shhooots!
That was an amazing and epic chapter
I AM SO GLAD that the story is back I've missed this so much
Gah Pete of course has to be a dick and Omg Nikki and Kina are half sisters well thats good yet a shock to me.
Hopefully Mason won't get in too much trouble I mean he was tryign to save the day
WOOT FOR THE COPS that were nice I don't think the Spainish Acent one is nice at all
Moore soon?
Clara

HOLY SHIT! :O

Update soon?!

hey guys,
that was in a weird way cute. it's good to know that things, although they take time, can eventually get better.
i'm really sorry about your loss nikki,
and i've been through it enough to know that that necessarily isn't going to make anything at all better,
but if either of you need anything, i'm here, and i'm not just saying that.
xo
jadee

yay, they're back together

yeesssssss it was so wroth waiting for i missed this story
i'm sorry nikki for your loss i hope you'll get back to feeling okay more

OH MY GOD! AN UPDATE AND IT WAS IN MASONS POV!
that is amazing! i love it.
definently not what i expected right now. but of course i love it to death!
masons all sentamental and all, so sweet.
i was actualy thinking about this earlier today, i was so close to thinking that you would never update! you proved me wrong! this just made my day, no, my whole fucking week!
wow, hospital sex.
and the fact that nikki and trace bet on it.
its just so amazing!
i love it!
moresoon? pwease?!

I'm sorry to hear about your uncle :(

It was a great chapter by the way.

It's been way too long guys. ):

Awwwww
YAY happy moment for Tracey!
omg you lucky i would be hurt if Kina died like that
woooot Mason is back ahhaha Mitchel has to watch over him.
I don't think i like Gabe either he made fun of short people XD
GREAT JOB!
i've misssed this story like hell
Moore soon?
Clara

Yay!!!!
I'm so glad the baby is Trace's :D

wow, that was alot for one chapter.
so masons out! yay! and mitchel was there!
lieghton is soo cute! haha. that was sweet.
so, mason remains the father of only one kid. wow, and hes standing right next to her and has no idea. thats sad. =(
and back to mason again, seems like he finaly learned some self control. =)

this really is nice. things seem to be starting to take a turn for the better. so what are you going to throw at us now?
im really happy for them now, even if this is fiction. haha.
i cant wait for and update! so do it soon please!

so, its been quite a while since you two updated. is something wrong? or is it a fluke?
because i have been awaiting an update for a while now... =)

Holy Shit!

Update soon!? Please?!?!?

YAY!
and Awww god Pete is stupid i really didn't think he had the nerves to do that
Thank goodness the baby is okay
Awww at least Gabe tried to be nice
Amazin chapter ladies
I love the updates
Clara

MY GOD! you guys are on a roll!
seriously! this story is going to end with every guy in jail! (well except trace, if he doesnt do something stupid for nikki)
ugh, i have to write a slash story involving pete and after that its going to be hard to make it sweet.
wow, i had a feeling that pete was going to do something when he locked up nikki, but all of that!
and whats up with kina and handcuffs! you would think that she would stop using them with all of he times theyve been used against her!
and i was sure that the "figure" was trace at first but i was wrong.
i swear, trace is amazing compared to everyone else in the story, i mean, he has good intentions, he loves nikki, hes excited to (maybe) be a father, i really love him.
god, i dont see any sex in nikki or kinas near future. *sigh*
my gosh, the baby. wow, this is proving to be a difficult situation!
how do you guys do this? i mean, you just have to love these charecters, how do you put them through sooo much stuff. i know that its suposed to be a drama but still!???
once again, i love it and you two have completely amazed me!
more soon, please??!!

WHOA DANG!! D-R-A-M-A!! Gosh, for some reason I just love how Gabe came to the rescue...Which is weird because, really, he should be hated because of last chapter and everything...But I just really love that it was Gabe that was the hero! :D And when are we going to find out who the father of Nikki's baby is?!?!? I'm dying to know!!!

:(
Poor Kina.

that just made me cry, and thats not easy.
i wouldnt have left lieghton there, ever.
oh my god, that makes mason seem like an angel, compared to what he did to her. and it seems so sad, i mean, poor kina.
wow, it looks like mason and kina are loosing everything and trace and nikki are on a real joy ride. i am stunned. gabe... wow, um, i know its just a fictional story but i dont like gabe any more. haha. im liking vicky, shes a good girl. looking after lieghton and everything. so nice!
and the way that shes got real support. kina is lucky in that sense but still, shes been abused too many times.
i just want to see her with someone that makes her happy, loves lieghton and wont hurt her. but this is like a tv show, it wont ever be happy..
or at least i dont think it will.
oh wow.
more soon please??? please!?