I'll Be The End That You Deserve. - Comments

It cool! Love it!

please update!!! (:

I loveeeeeee ittttt

love this, just found it and its great
please update soon for your newest subscriber :D

I Love it, at 1st i was thing you know just another story however i can not stop reading this one. keep upi the good work! >.<

This is really amazing! I hope you update soon.

I read it I read it I loved it i loved it and I know you are using the song as guide line which you told me but I think it will be a great story.

Nice. I really don't know what to say. I guess I look forward to reading more and I know where you got the idea from.

Hiya Lina, this story is amazing!
The banner is absolutely beautiful and it fits the story quite well, as do the story and chapter titles.
The only thing I think that could do with some slight editing is one of the last paragraphs where William explains the Dandies.
"The Dandies, a title we gave ourselves. It was superior and most other vampires feared the titles. They would probably be waiting for me, to give them the signal to hunt." I think a full stop could have been swapped with a comma or a joining word, such as and or then, kind of thing.

Other than that, the story was great, the emotions and point of view by William was quite humorous and very interesting. Great work, hon.