Through the eyes of Someone Else - Comments

  • EuphoricTragedies

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    Definitely interesting, keep on with it. ;].
    February 24th, 2008 at 07:23pm
  • LETSDANCENAKED!

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    I think you should most definately carry on!
    Sounds great Emily!
    :)
    xx
    January 25th, 2008 at 08:42pm
  • Starless City;

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    wow i sound like that character, alot...that's cool

    but i love it :] and yes do go on
    December 23rd, 2007 at 04:27am
  • I C G P

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    Oooh this is good.

    Try putting a description on it, like who is it about and who's writing it etc. It makes more people interested in your story.

    Other than that it sounds fantastic! I love the simplicity of your writing, some thing I aim and fail to achieve. Please carry on!
    xoxo
    September 17th, 2007 at 12:46am
  • xx--rockstar--xx

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    *subscribes* yes, yes, yes - carry on plllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllz!!!!!!
    = ] x
    September 15th, 2007 at 02:28am
  • Oh Franklin!

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    Oh, wowsiness!
    This is amazing, so mysterious to keep the reader guessing! Carry on, you must!
    I promised to leave a comment and subscribe so I am....is it an original fic?

    Anyways greatness!
    Love it!
    ily
    Betty
    xxxx
    September 14th, 2007 at 02:20pm
  • montypython13

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    the begining is good, but it doesn't set up any story line.

    But, I like the simplicity of the charater's thinking.

    I try to write like that, lol.

    I just nevr post anything.

    Yeah, keep going.
    September 14th, 2007 at 03:24am
  • No Longer Here

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    Fuck, yes continue!!

    It's really good.

    You seem like an amazing writer.

    Continue, and tell me when you got more!!
    September 14th, 2007 at 02:50am
  • Save My Soul

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    It seems like an intresting story.

    Yes continue I'd like to see where it goes.
    September 14th, 2007 at 02:06am