I was just like... waiting for Sixx to show up and he never did and that scares me to death... where is he? I... I ... I'm like... lost in life now. Poor Nyk, he's so broken, he just needs a little help that's all. Someone to show him what love really is. Poor dear.
Damn well better be chasing after that boy Sixx. About time.
But awww, that was so sweet of Andy and Ryder. I didn't expect that out of either of them, so that was pleasant. :) It's nice to see people care about him so much. I know that Nyk will understand when Sixx shows up... he loves him anyway. :) Just took a minute.
So umm... If Sixx doesn't fucking run after him then I'm going to hunt him down and make him. This is unacceptable Nyk!!! DX!!!!!! And seriously, how on earth did he manage to get out of that apartment by himself without anyone noticing because... well... ridiculous!! DX!!!!!!
This is your wake up call Sixx... I really hope that it works because it might be the only chance that he has... Also.. What the fuck Nyk? Really? Arrow? Really? Really now? We know better than this.
As much as I absolutely hate that Nyk is so attached to Arrow, the asshole, I love the way it's written. It makes sense that he'd be attached to the only form of love that he was given in those months, because even though it sucks to say this, Sixx stopped trying; and essentially stopped loving Nyk, or well... that's what it would seem. And while Arrow is an asinine jerk, he never abandoned Nyk completely, and all Sixx wants to do is give up.
So basically... you're breaking my heart, but I love it. Yeah...
Sixx just needs to show Nyk that he can be loved again, and he needs to stop proving Arrow right. Just the satisfaction of knowing that he's proving the... I'm out of original insults... damn... him wrong, should be enough. Wake up Sixx, Nyk needs you, and has needed you from the beginning.
Great plot. The story is coming out great and I'd love if there could be more details on what nyk's life was with arrow. Arrows situation seems really badboyish and I have to admit that it's what I find exiting. Can't wait for the next chapter. C=
I really hope that Sixx relaxes a little bit. Rain needs him to take care of him, or to at least hold him while he cries... if he's away in jail, that won't help anyone.
Okay, re-read them, and I have to say, I had to stop because I wanted to cry.. again.. I always feel so scared when crazy stuff happens, but I love it at the same time... I think that it's my brain telling me that I'm slightly emotionally masochistic and that's not safe.. haha, but it's good I suppose... sometimes. :D!!
just a note, there are a couple of times where it randomly switches into third person. It doesn't happen a lot, just a fair few, just a heads up. :) Great job. can't wait for more! :D!
I'll re-read in a minute, but I just feel so awful for him. Nyk needs someone to hold him.. ahem Sixx, and he just doesn't seem to be getting that. Poor thing. I hope that he feels better soon. And Stockholm Syndrome isn't uncommon in a relationship like that, so he shouldn't feel so bad, but I understand why he would. Poor thing. Feel better.
Okay, I'll come back in a few and comment on the first couple of chapters. :)