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  • ilovebvb

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    coooool update plz
    May 23rd, 2010 at 12:37am
  • EmoButterflies

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    OH MY GOTH!!!! AMAZING!!! =)
    October 18th, 2009 at 07:24am
  • ninaholic

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    Hannahz!! ;o)
    Amazing. I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. C:
    October 18th, 2009 at 06:08am
  • EmoButterflies

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    Uh oh wonder whats gonna happen? Love it!!! =)
    October 17th, 2009 at 01:27am
  • EmoButterflies

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    love it way better then mine!!!!!! =)
    October 16th, 2009 at 07:31am
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    *rolls eyes* don't be silly. you're as much apart of this as me!
    October 16th, 2009 at 05:35am
  • EmoButterflies

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    It all depends on you i'm just the co person or whatever ha ha
    October 16th, 2009 at 05:25am
  • justhannah;

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    yeah I wanted to do it...
    :P but if you really want, it's okay...
    October 16th, 2009 at 05:23am
  • EmoButterflies

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    Oh sorry did you want to do it we can take it out? =)
    October 16th, 2009 at 05:19am
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    wow love it! you kinda sped up the last part btw...
    October 16th, 2009 at 05:17am
  • justhannah;

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    He he :D chuckle...giggle!
    October 15th, 2009 at 08:07pm
  • EmoButterflies

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    I certainly will! ha ha =D
    October 15th, 2009 at 08:05pm
  • justhannah;

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    haha you rock Faye. Go tell 'em!
    October 15th, 2009 at 08:04pm
  • EmoButterflies

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    Who cares about the god damn spelling it's amazing!!!!!!! =)
    October 15th, 2009 at 08:00pm
  • CourtneyRiot.

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    I love the story line, all your ideas. There were a few mistakes, like you said "haha" when it wasnt in quotes, and you spelt Drawer wrong..
    (just trying tp help)
    October 15th, 2009 at 07:27pm
  • EmoButterflies

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    I love the banners they are amazing!!!!!!!! I'm obsessed with them now ha ha =)
    October 14th, 2009 at 09:34pm
  • Sunber

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    Okay, so I read the description, which was beautifully done by the way, and it got me actually wanting to read more. And then i read the first chapter. And even though i'm subject to just writing and then posting a lot of the time without revising, i also use spell check. Drawer is how you spell it... and shin is what you were looking for with 'mid-chins' because chin is like... the bottom half of your face.
    I think you didn't have enough lead up to the flashback, although I understand because it was a prologue.... oh wait, i think you called it a preface... There's a difference between a prologue and a preface. A prologue is what happens BEFORE the story happend (Which is what that was) and a preface is like... an excerpt into what is GOING to happen in the story...
    To write a story, you have to put in a lot of emotion... so put yourself in as the character and how that character would act, but you have to see YOURSELF doing the action. So like, when she was running to get the phone, she would probably be more STUMBLING up the stairs to get to a phone, terrified out of her mind, she'd even remember to lock the door behind her. You know?
    But besides that, it's a REALLY good plot, i specifically like the description. I usually read stories with more than 10 chapters though, and I know a lot of other people do that too, so that might be why you're thinking you should have more readers....
    So, tell me when you have more chapters, and I might read more.
    Good job :D
    Sunny-Lee <3
    October 14th, 2009 at 07:50pm
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    Loving the two new banners; the last one is my favorite.
    October 14th, 2009 at 01:27pm
  • BlissfulNightmare;

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    two: Liked her outfit; although liking the drawing more. Wondering what's going to happen next? Can't wait to read and find out.
    October 13th, 2009 at 05:17pm
  • Kool-Kid

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    I want to read more but there's no more chapters! :3
    Hurray and updayt.
    October 13th, 2009 at 03:07am
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