Katie, you've outdone yourself again :) I like itttt. I think Ephraim should get mad at her though. I mean, she did leave him for three months. A little anger wouldn't be too out of place. But I think, if you chose to make him angry or not, the story will be amazing. You're kind of rushing it, just a bit. Not enough to really matter, though. And it could just be me that feels that way. Anyway, good job ;)
Oooooh this story is just so so so so SO good : ) And while I'm glad Tyler is back, is it wrong that I kinda want Ephraim to get angry with her? I mean, she hurt him really bad, he at least deserves some explanation. Can't wait for more!! : D
"Sleep, Arizona Tyler," bringing his left hand out from under his pillow to cup her cheek. "Sleep." And then he leaned towards her and brushed his lips against her's ever so slightly, making her eyes close shut.
That is one of my favorite parts. =] I love it. I also love this story, and I'm sad it doesn't have enough comments. Just keep updating. ^-^
Wow, this is so good! It's amazing. I'm going to go and look at all your other stories now, if you have some. This also reminded me of my boyfriend, just because it was cute and romantic.
I don't think it's bad that you have a rant in the author's notes. And it irritates me as well when people subscribe but they don't comment. It doesn't take that much.
Lovely update, by the way. =] I thinks it's really good. And I'm sitting here with my coffee, really tired and all, and then I read this and the end and I saw and I was like "Ooh, she's tired too, but unlike me she's actually doing something instead of just sitting there." xD Haha. Update again soon. =]
I like Tyler's person, even though she left and hurt Ephraim. She just seems like this sweet little unique person :) i especially like the humming :) but what is she doing back? is she going to hurt him again?
It has a sad beginning but I can't wait to catch up on the rest.
The layout is quite lovely. :)