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  • lost.in.time

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    I just decided to read this and I love it already!
    It has a sad beginning but I can't wait to catch up on the rest.
    The layout is quite lovely. :)
    February 19th, 2010 at 04:13am
  • blue jay.

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    aww :)
    update soon!
    February 17th, 2010 at 01:56am
  • be realistic.

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    THAT WAS TOO CUTE.
    I'm excited for the baaaaaaaaaaaaby, and everything else that comes with/before it.
    February 14th, 2010 at 05:22am
  • finnick odair

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    Katie, you've outdone yourself again :)
    I like itttt.
    I think Ephraim should get mad at her though. I mean, she did leave him for three months.
    A little anger wouldn't be too out of place. But I think, if you chose to make him angry or not, the story will be amazing.
    You're kind of rushing it, just a bit. Not enough to really matter, though. And it could just be me that feels that way.
    Anyway, good job ;)
    November 24th, 2009 at 09:28am
  • MassRomantic

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    Oooooh this story is just so so so so SO good : )
    And while I'm glad Tyler is back, is it wrong that I kinda want Ephraim to get angry with her? I mean, she hurt him really bad, he at least deserves some explanation.
    Can't wait for more!! : D
    November 21st, 2009 at 01:43am
  • personalspaceinvader

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    "Sleep, Arizona Tyler," bringing his left hand out from under his pillow to cup her cheek. "Sleep." And then he leaned towards her and brushed his lips against her's ever so slightly, making her eyes close shut.

    That is one of my favorite parts. =] I love it.
    I also love this story, and I'm sad it doesn't have enough comments.
    Just keep updating. ^-^
    November 16th, 2009 at 12:01am
  • be realistic.

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    That chapter was freaking adorable.
    November 15th, 2009 at 07:10pm
  • rosetta.

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    Wow, this is so good! It's amazing. I'm going to go and look at all your other stories now, if you have some. Cheese
    This also reminded me of my boyfriend, just because it was cute and romantic.
    November 15th, 2009 at 09:00am
  • be realistic.

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    I really liked that chapter. You got it perfect, which means staying up that late/early was well worth it. Um, yea.
    November 1st, 2009 at 09:02pm
  • personalspaceinvader

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    I don't think it's bad that you have a rant in the author's notes. And it irritates me as well when people subscribe but they don't comment.
    It doesn't take that much.

    Lovely update, by the way. =] I thinks it's really good.
    And I'm sitting here with my coffee, really tired and all, and then I read this and the end and I saw and I was like "Ooh, she's tired too, but unlike me she's actually doing something instead of just sitting there."
    xD Haha.
    Update again soon. =]
    October 31st, 2009 at 09:24pm
  • MassRomantic

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    Oh man, I really really love this. It's lovely : )
    You've really come into your own as a writer.
    Love youu!
    October 22nd, 2009 at 05:46pm
  • blue jay.

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    Ah, and the layout is GORGEOUS. I seriously can't get over how much I love it haha.
    October 19th, 2009 at 10:23pm
  • blue jay.

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    I like Tyler's person, even though she left and hurt Ephraim. She just seems like this sweet little unique person :)
    i especially like the humming :)
    but what is she doing back? is she going to hurt him again?
    October 19th, 2009 at 10:21pm
  • for the birds

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    I like this. (:
    October 19th, 2009 at 03:54pm
  • be realistic.

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    I liked the rewrite.
    October 18th, 2009 at 07:23pm
  • legacy .

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    This is amazing!
    I loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee this!!
    Awesome, awesome, awesome job!
    October 18th, 2009 at 05:00am
  • solovely;

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    She came back! :) Yay!
    October 18th, 2009 at 04:32am
  • personalspaceinvader

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    Yayyyyyyyy. :D
    She's humming! xD
    October 18th, 2009 at 04:17am
  • personalspaceinvader

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    I like it.
    Can't wait to read more.
    *subscribe!*
    October 18th, 2009 at 01:32am
  • be realistic.

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    I like this story, so much.
    I can't wait to see where it goes.
    October 18th, 2009 at 01:24am