October 12th, 2009 at 08:27pm
Hey, this is really good. Some powerful writing going on here :). Just the last paragraph... do you mean 'My love for the rain could never come close to my love for him'?
It's just that last sentence that seems a bit awkwardly phrased?
Keep up the good work :)
It has been a while eh?
i started a new story actually.
It sucks atm though :/