I really like your story. :) I always think that the strangest things happen because of some reason, but many people don't see that. I also liked your terms, and I think yours is better than MINE :O By the way, thanks for the story comment. :D
I really liked this, Lyssa! Especially how you gave a reason for the phobia. Sometimes phobias don't have a trigger, but I think it's easier on the reader if there is one: it means they can rationalise it, in a way.
And I'm so glad he was cured! I really liked the character of Eric, so I'm glad it worked out for him. (:
October 12th, 2009 at 11:15pm
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