Don’t Walk Away. - Comments

Ur story is good and can't wait for the next part update please :)

aw, ahaha SHUT UP MY WIFE'S IN LABOUR.
lovely.
xo

Just read it, and I'm liking it so far :)
But I think you should know that in America, they use dollars not pounds.
And I was wondering why Michael's name is always in bold?
:)
Update when you can

hahaha, sophie's the maid ;P
i also love the thought of michael jackson having a whipped cream mustache almost as much as i love this update<3

aawesomechapter(:
xo

sweet story ^_^

yay(:
that made my day when i saw this had been updated ;D
xo

I really like this! I can tell theres going to be so much drama and I like it! Please keep this up

Ok, so I can already tell this is going to be an awesome story!
I loved the first chapter, and I can't wait to see where this goes.
The plot is really good, and I'm interested to see how things started what's going on between her and Michael.
Update soon!
<3

This was a very beautiful story...I'm hoping to read more very soon...(:
You have quite a talent...I found no mistakes at all....I love it...

♥Jenni♥

This is wonderful! I can't wait to see where it goes. Only issue, that blue font is eye wrenching. Maybe bold and black would make it easier on the eyes.

woah; comment virginity.
i love this story so far. It's actually awesome.
update sooooon xo