Your Eyes Shine Like The Stars At Night - Comments

  • xerinxelizabethx17

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    its been a while i know. but im so sad its over. this was a GREAT story (: amazing just amazing. <3
    November 3rd, 2010 at 01:42am
  • erratic

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    alkdfjasklfj

    WHY DID I ONLY FINISH READING THIS STORY NOW?!

    Scarlett and Jack were a lovely couple and I absolutely adored this entire story. From Scarlett's initiation into The Catastrophe and Jack's nervous vomiting, to Scarlett's intentional vomiting, to Jack breaking through her bitchy facade, to the promise ring and the adorable end of the story.

    Expect more story comments from me.

    :D
    August 16th, 2010 at 07:14am
  • cinderella.

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    Oh. My. Frikkin'. God.

    This story was amazing! Words cannot describe how beautiful this story was. The characters progressed wonderfully, and it was so realistic. I loved the seemingly endless struggle between Scarlett and her bulimia/anorexia that she had. A lot of people don't understand how bad an eating disorder can affect someone, and you captured that effortlessly in this story. I was completely and utterly captivated from the first chapter onward.

    The characters were believable, and the plot progressed at a great pace, and it ended beautifully. The ending was cute and everything about it was just lovable from the beginning to end. It was frustrating to watch her lie and lie, but everything unfolded and Jack found out, and it was all worth it in the end. Everything came together and I don't think I saw a loose tie you forgot to knot in the ending. Overall, this was phenomenal.

    Your writing is spectacular, and everything you bring to your stories are just unbelievable. This was written remarkably and with such impeccable skill and planning for the plot, it came together and it worked. You never fail to wow me and stun me with your talent. I adored this story and I loved it with all of my heart.
    August 15th, 2010 at 01:33pm
  • brianna7x

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    D'AWWWWWWWWWWWW that ending was cute too!
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    So, so sweet.
    August 13th, 2010 at 02:47am
  • rivals are insane

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    awwwwwwwwwwww that was sooooo sweet!
    August 12th, 2010 at 08:36am
  • Akayytoremember

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    I always hate to see stories end :(
    But I really like the way you ended things, with a promise to the future! lo
    August 12th, 2010 at 06:15am
  • The Color Abi

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    Awwww!
    Such a cute ending!
    August 12th, 2010 at 12:52am
  • brianna7x

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    Well Jack is just freaking sweet isn't he? Those two chapters were so adorable <3
    August 11th, 2010 at 03:10am
  • xerinxelizabethx17

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    GASSPP how dare you say its almost finished! THATS NOT FAIIIR ):
    August 7th, 2010 at 08:37pm
  • rivals are insane

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    awwww that was soooo cute :D
    love the update :D
    August 6th, 2010 at 11:14am
  • ImaginationOverload.

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    They did the dirty! :D I dun want this to end neither! Please write like, a hundred more chapters? PLEASE? I'll less than three you forever!

    Even though I kinda already do... XD

    Anyways, the end of this chapter was RIDICULOUSLY cute. Like seriously. :]
    August 5th, 2010 at 11:56pm
  • The Color Abi

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    But I dunne want this to end!
    August 5th, 2010 at 11:50pm
  • The Color Abi

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    Love, love, love the update.
    =3
    August 5th, 2010 at 09:18pm
  • neon.band.aids.

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    YES IM WONDERING WHAT IT IS!!!!!!!!!! please update soon!!!!!!!
    August 5th, 2010 at 07:23pm
  • rivals are insane

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    love the update :D
    hmmm what did she get him? chuckle i thinks i may have an idea ;)
    August 5th, 2010 at 12:22pm
  • xerinxelizabethx17

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    awwwwwwwww the necklace thing was so cute hehe i love them <33
    August 5th, 2010 at 06:33am
  • rivals are insane

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    love this so far :D
    im subscribing :D
    August 3rd, 2010 at 08:22pm
  • brianna7x

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    Awh, that's good. Sandra wasn't a COMPLETE bitchhh....
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    love the url by the way!
    August 3rd, 2010 at 07:19am
  • xerinxelizabethx17

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    YAY!! they made up! now... update? (: thanks! :D
    August 3rd, 2010 at 06:06am
  • The Color Abi

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    N'aww!
    I'm glad they're good again :)
    August 2nd, 2010 at 12:35pm