Mercy - Comments

this is so interesting.
I love it
(:

i love the way you describe whats going on, the words you use ah! love your writing and the story :) can't wait for more

This story deserves a SHITTON of comments! I love Hard Man Billie XD

Yay for an amazing update!

Joey's mean :(

I look forward to the next chapter XD

Whoop! After being snowed in with University work for what feels like a decade...I thoroughly enjoyed escaping in the two latest updates.

Your characterisation of Billie is legendary!!

And I still have no idea as to what is going to happen next. I love that fact.

And I love this story!! Can't wait for more.

damn that was wow!

i agree, update soon please :)

i know im annoying but please update soon lol

I don't think my brain works right....I actually didn't see that coming!!

And now I'm hungry for more!!!

Amazing update :)

oh snap that was a shock!

aww

lovely update :)

god this is so amazing!

Oooh, and the plot thickens.

What I love about this story is that it never fails to surprise me. I NEVER saw that coming with Joey. And also, I have NO idea where the rest of the story is going to go. I like that fact; it all adds to your originality :)

Can't wait for the next part.

Ahaaaa...take THAT Elliot!! Go Billie :)

Can't wait until the next chapter

i thought it was a pretty good chapter, the way you conveyed mike's fear and insecurities is top notch :)

fucking loved it update soon please good sir or madam

Amazing update!!!

Can't wait for the next chapter!

amazing
more please=D

loved the update :)