love ur story...............UPDATE
October 14th, 2009 at 11:01pm
Burning It Down, All the Way to Bat Country - Comments
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I'm VERY curious now. I think the idea of a Matt pov would be an awesome idea. i can't wait for it to come out. update very soon.October 14th, 2009 at 10:26pm
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awesome start to the story, slightly confused about school though. is she home schooled?? or do her parents just not care about that for her? =S
*subcribed*
<3October 14th, 2009 at 07:24pm -
Im Very curious now.
Your very good at this lol
And She has a point about the spacing with the quotations because two of my stories have been reported because of that.
Other than that
AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFULL CHAPTER:D lolOctober 14th, 2009 at 06:45pm -
wow, i like your story keep up the workOctober 14th, 2009 at 04:39pm
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wow this is a awesome story!! but i'm still a little confused about the subject of school an all that....i mean she's 15 an always home? or is it just a weekend? ^^ but other than that. i can't wait for a update this story rock's!October 14th, 2009 at 03:39pm
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OMG you haaaaaaaaaave to update this is a great story! how did matt find out? i need to know i want to know you MUST tell me!October 14th, 2009 at 03:17pm
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Mehheheheh! Let's see what the future holds for this story. I see amazingness. Continue,.......October 14th, 2009 at 01:09pm
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I like it, it's really good so far. The chapters are a tad short, I'm looking forward to the next chapter!October 14th, 2009 at 12:48pm
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I really like your story keep reading. please?:):)
<3AmandaOctober 14th, 2009 at 10:18am -
A pretty cool chapter.
Nice work :)
But - of course - there is one thing I want to point out.
When your writing quotations, or when your characters are having a conversation, you don't seperate the sentences.
Your writing; "La la la," she said. "Blah blah," he answered.
When in actuality, it's supposed to be;
"la la la," she said.
"Blah blah," he answered...
Just thought I'd put that out there because some people will report your stories for things like that,
x,
Nice job.October 14th, 2009 at 03:47am -
I love the update!! Can't wait for the next one!!October 14th, 2009 at 03:34am
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it's really a good start can't wait for more.October 14th, 2009 at 03:27am
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Mhmmm, greatness! keep writing!
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this is seriously good(: i lilke it, you should update soon(: and people should comment more and prove they liked the story or sumthing, But really its good(:October 14th, 2009 at 02:58am
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woop woop, niiiice. Keep up the good work butter cupOctober 14th, 2009 at 02:45am
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I liked it, you should post the next chapterOctober 14th, 2009 at 12:36am
