Im Very curious now. Your very good at this lol And She has a point about the spacing with the quotations because two of my stories have been reported because of that. Other than that AMAZINGLY BEAUTIFULL CHAPTER:D lol
wow this is a awesome story!! but i'm still a little confused about the subject of school an all that....i mean she's 15 an always home? or is it just a weekend? ^^ but other than that. i can't wait for a update this story rock's!
A pretty cool chapter. Nice work :) But - of course - there is one thing I want to point out. When your writing quotations, or when your characters are having a conversation, you don't seperate the sentences. Your writing; "La la la," she said. "Blah blah," he answered. When in actuality, it's supposed to be; "la la la," she said. "Blah blah," he answered...
Just thought I'd put that out there because some people will report your stories for things like that, x, Nice job.
this is seriously good(: i lilke it, you should update soon(: and people should comment more and prove they liked the story or sumthing, But really its good(: