Behind These Hazel Eyes - Comments

This was so cute!
Not gonna lie. I thought that it was going to be painful to read this. Not because I thought it was bad, but because it was so long.
I’m happy to say that I read the whole thing in about 2 days, it sucked me in. I liked that Jaden was bold and determined to not live
his live blind, and that he became more and more independent as time went on. You’re character’s developed well throughout the
Ssory, and they never regressed, which was a nice thing to see. It can be hard sometimes to move forward with a personality when
you have run out of ideas. I know that this story has been finished for a few months, but I’m glad to see that you work through your
writer’s block without writing the same thing repeatedly. Very nicely done (:

LMAO I was listening to My Muffin by J Bigga when I read chapter 25. Forrealz. I likez this.

AWWWWWWW! Yay! He can see! I luved this story! Are you going to make a sequel?

I Loved The Ending Awesome Story

awwwwww that was the perfect ending!
the boys are soooo freaking cute!
and now everyone should have sex...it cures everything! (and what a fuuuun cure!)

who knew sex could cure blindness?

awe... if it's the end, it's a perfect one

this was a really beautiful story. I love how it turned out. i was so happy i cried. [: Nice job. <3

Awww!

wasn't too bad, but should've written out the sex

aw. [:
the final chapter is next? :[

i dont really think it matters too much if you put in the sex scene or not since they are all basically the same, unless you had plans for something to happen during it.......update soon!!
i hope there will be a sequel!!!!

I love this cant wait for the last chapter!!!

very cool

cute!

aw

awwwww! both the boys are completely adorable together!
idk if ive commented before on this....but i am now! this story rooocks.

ouch

awe... cool!

...he's like a chick!