The World Froze in Time - Comments

awe. so good. i would definitely read this if it was a story. its brilliant and wonderfully written.

Holy cow!!! that was amazing realllllly good!
I don't think I've ever read anything quite like it. The whole tone was really amazing, happy and light but there was some darkness in there too. I liked that you used Both of them and not just one or the other.
Honestly though incredible.
Keep up the amazingness.
Oh and Lso I really liked that your put music into the story like that I've never read anything remotely close to some rung lime that. It amazes me that people can actually do something like that.
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omg love it plzzzz make it into a story

That was so cute = )
Kinda makes me want a Zacky all of my own ; ) Tee hee!!
I'm with Taylor on the whole story possibility-ness. And I'm sure there was a more coherent way of saying that!! My bad. I blame the sleepiness =D

Anyways. Loved it!! And I think you should consider turning it into a story. = ) x

I loved it!
It was so sweet!
I'm really hoping you make this a story though. It's left me very curious.
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