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  • jjjjeanlovesyou!

    jjjjeanlovesyou! (100)

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    Gah!
    That...that..
    I thought that they were gonna get justice,
    because of the camera.
    And then the cop,
    1.) Breaks his camera illegally.
    2.) Hurts them for no reason.
    3.) Arrests Tony for NO REASON.
    4.) Is a total jerkwad.
    5.) IS JUST...A BAD COP!

    GAH!

    Great writing, though.
    I was a little confused at the beginning, but stuck with it,
    and got into it.

    And now I'm mad at that cop.
    If that happened to me, I wouldn't of been able to control myself.
    I'd be kicking some ass.

    heehee ;D
    February 28th, 2010 at 07:28am
  • jesus christ.

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    that cop is a faghead, who deserves to be severely beaten with his own nightstick.
    that poor camera.
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    December 25th, 2009 at 08:12am
  • Ghoul Scouts

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    It was a good short story. But I do wish you wrote more. I wanted to know what happened next!
    (:
    But I could feel the mian narrators feelings as I read the stroy. Which was pretty cool because I never had that happen when I read before ever.

    Again, great short story.
    October 26th, 2009 at 10:55pm
  • Anna12345

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    Whoa. I have no idea who to type. So I guess I'll just say I liked your story. :)
    October 15th, 2009 at 10:52pm