I Can Take It If You Need To Take It Out On Someone - Comments

Chapter # 4....Thats me..

Thank you,it really comes from somewhere behind my mind,i don't really classify it as heartful literature.

<3 Ryan_Rainbow

i like this alot.

Will do my faithful reader.^^

Write on,Right on.

Sorry if this is late, my computer is completely broken and I haven't had time to check my mail in a while.

That last chapter, I will admit it, was scary but makes perfect sense and I felt completely in love with its sickness and pain. I don't know why, maybe I'm just crazy, but I find it attractive when a story has a acute pain put out there in the open, but still written with such brilliance that you write with. The whole chapter just fed my addiction, your writing is magnificent. The story is sad but not sad, I guess its clean, pure and truthful, yet not about anything so beautiful, its just the literature and view on it that takes my breath away in more ways than one. I almost felt like crying what I read this chapter, though, so keep up the amazing work.

Awe thank you so much,your comment truly added something to my morose days.I will definitely keep up the writing.

Write On.Right On.

Well, I think its amazing. Your writing style is clear and determined and makes perfect sense. I love the way you have written it. The first chapter took my breath away... its just crazy. Its very beautiful in a dark and unnatural way. Keep writing and I will comment as often as possible.