She's 18 and a Beauty Queen - Comments

No way.
An update!?
I don't believe it!
I'm hooked again. ;)

Update soon! :D

YAY! An update :)
Seriously, this is cute.
I enjoy reading it, so please, update again soon?

loved it!
Gerards life story was impressive.
I don't like smoking... that made me laugh though xD

Excited for the next chapter!

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Tehehehe. I loved when Gerard said his life story the most! Update again soon.

Naww, I'm not your only reader. Look, you have some followers going :) You're getting pretty popular! Ha, nice cover up by Gerard. Just admiring her outfit, as if! He was admiring more than that. The fight about whether Quinn said it or she didn't was freakin' cute too.And the last few sentences about going home to cry? Genius.
I really enjoy reading this, so update again!

I freakin' love it
and you now have more than one reader.
and more than two. ^___^
update soooon, pretty please. :D

I love it! It's total fuckin awesomeness!

You don't only have one reader! I love this story to! So HAH! +)

Chapter 2:

*Amazed eyes*
I LOVED how she came through in Gerard's eyes. Looks like someone might be developing a little crush, maybe? But that's just me. Just a question, is Talia's name pronounced; Tal-ee-ah or Tarr-lee-arr? I know a few people who have the same spelling but it's pronounced completely different.

I'm definitely subscribing, so, you better update again soon.

xo.

Chapter 1:

I like how you told the first chapter. It was informative and I like how much description you used. I can't wait to see more of Talia's personality and interactions with other characters. I'm off to read the second chapter!