The Laws of Attraction - Comments

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Poor Frank.
I'm guessing Rebecca took it badly...?
Update soon, PLEAASE!

Really enjoyed the insight into Gerard and Frank's past. I can understand why Gerard would be attracted to Frank - who could blame him? Can't wait for more.

I really like the premise of this story. As for your questions and comments after Chapter 2, in my opinion you can NEVER be too detailed or graphic - especially when it comes to anything involving sex. On the subject of errors, I read so many stories on here that now I just overlook them. All stories have typos and a LOT of the people that write here don't know the difference between your and you're or to, two and too, etc. I did not notice any glaring errors in your chapters but like I say, I wasn't looking. I think if the story is interesting, people won't care about a few misspelled or misused words or if the tense is past or present. You have a great storyline that has a quick and interesting pace. Keep it up! I cannot wait for more updates.

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I like this story.
Frank obviously chose a suckish roomie.
Way to be, Gee. XD
Update soon, please!

PLEASE COMMENT!

I really want you to. xD