A Forgotten Time - Comments

NAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATHAN you need to write some more like now... I keep reading the same 2 chapter moooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooore now

NATHAN. UPDATE PLEASE
IT AWESOME
LOVE IT
NEXT CHAPTER PLEASE

Second chapter is just as good as the first.
Please update soon.

This is excellent, but the main question is when are you introducing me?!?!
Seriously though you are really good, just don't take as long to put up the next chapters lol
I won't except excuses mister, you better get to work lol

It's really good.
I enjoyed it and will subscibe.
You're discription is amazing, my Writer's Craft teacher would love every word you've written
I think I'm jealous... yep, I'm jealous of your ability :P
Love it

<3333 iloveittt

I really liked this. I'm glad I decided to read this tonight. I found it really cleverly written and full of incredible description. You, my friend, truly are a brilliant writer.

dude dude dude, more now thank you!!!!!!!!
it is awesome, i wants it....*pulls out memory stick and saves* so...oh yeah, i like the part about me almost killing her with a door, that sounds just like me. XD, its awesome, keep going.

Awesome!!!!! We are in the story, finally!!!! I was wondering how long it would take you lol
How do you write it with so much detail and stuff, you know so much more words than me lol
Its really good, but don't take forever to put up other chapters, I mean it!!!! :P

Love it Nathan.
=D