October 18th, 2009 at 06:57pm
there are no words I could use that would match the excellence of this piece.
I loved the simple format of it, I love the simple use or words and I love the small flashback.
The emotive language in this piece added to the brilliance of it.
I'm really glad I took the time to read this.
It deserves the reccing it's going to get.
I loved this.
The introduction and the end fitted well together, and were really nice and simple but drove the message home. The description was fantastic, it had a good and unexpected twist. I really liked the slant on Victoria, and the great dark slant on the lyric. I loved the suspense, with the flashback, and I got the pun with Victoria's people dressed in white, and the band dressed in white in The City Is At War, which goes quite well together.
There were a couple of minor errors, but nothing noticeable or big.
Overall, I loved it :D
Thanks for entering :D
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