I don't know what to say, other than you're writing is amazing and I love this story. The characters are so honest. (i don't know if that makes sense, but that's how i feel about it)
Love this story. It's written very well. I feel like I'm reading it out of a book. ^o^ I also like the layout (the layout is what pulled me to this story). I hate when people use plain layouts...it makes me not want to read them. Anyway....you should definitely update soon cuz I like this story abunches =)
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