Castle High's After School Horror - Comments

Fuck. Me.
Seriously, that deserves an A+!
I fucking love stories like this and it's so difficult to find a really well written one, and yours is the best I've ever come across!
I'm actually kinda glad Mikey was the killer, I dunno why. I just thought it suited him best. For some reason, Gerard's death got me the most, I had tears pouring from my eyes over his death... I think it was cause he'd been tortured to death and the only thing on his mind was to be sure that Mikey knew that he was sorry, and then for that moment Mikey was Mikey and not a psycho. :'( *sniffles*
I was really sad that Frankie died though, Gerard's and Frankie's deaths got to me the most, but more so Gee's.
I don't blame for Bob not telling the truth, because in reality no one would believe him. It's not fair but it's how it is. I do feel sorry for Chelsea though even though I really didn't like her...
Anyway, fantastic story, really well written. Heaps of suspense and good character formation and realistic responses, thank you for that! :)
I can't wait to read all your other stories now :P
p.s. if you get a book deal, let me know, I'll be your first buyer.

Two words. HOLY SHIT! i friggin read this whole thing in one day! Is it wierd that i feel for Mickey? i just wanna give him a hug.i just love pshyco stories like this.so anywho i wanna kill Bob for not tellin the truth. I'll stick with Mikey and Frankie... So sad.
Romeo and Romeo

okay so in the end i hate bob more than i hate mikey :( the fucking liar
bob needs to tell the truth

oh and just thought you should know that june 25th is my birthday :D and thats the day this chapter is based on i'll be 17!
anyway i loved the story and im gonna re-read it sometime :)

Nice one!! loved that ending!
poor bob and chelsea though:(

Amazing, amazing, amazing ending!
Why did Bob lie to her about not living with his father though?

That was a beautiful ending :D
In a scary and bad way, poor everyone!
xD

aweeeeee that was sad :( bob did lie quite a lot if i must say so. but i don't feel bad for chelsea that much, is that bad? she did kind of deserve it. but it's horrible that's she in the nut house cause she's not crazy. but why did bob lie about his dad? and his daddy's evil.

wonderful ending!

<3

It's a great ending
But do you know what? This ending could be a beginning of a sequel if I read it right, or just a longer story. PLOT TWISTS!
xD I think there could be more of a great story. But it's still an amazing ending!
:D

ooo nice ending, I love endings like that
Go you!

Nice, took ages, sorry!

Lots of description and a good flow about it... well done

Amazing.
I hope she doesn't go down for all of this...

THAT WAS AWESOME!!!
Can't wait for the end, much brilliance will happen, I'm sure of it :D
xD

woah wait a second, mikeys dead and....and i feel....sorry for.... him O.O wow
i dont want it to end yet :( but it has to
im gonna read it again :D
cant wait for the next chapter

OH MY GOD!!!!!!
that was so worth the wait!!!!!!!!!!
O_O

you're welcome :)

and it better a significantly long chapter lol ;)

can't wait for it!

<3

thanks for updating for me!! sorry i didn't get to read it yesterday, busy day lol.

but bob supposed to kill mikey...but he'll still be able to do that but then he will die, leaving chelsea to tell the world what happened? or maybe she's not really in a trance at all and she's just pretending and she'll be the one to kill mikey and then there's the possibility that the medics can save bob!

don't be too long!!

<3

I really don't want this story to end :(

Oh My GOD!!!
Please update this you CANNOT leave me hanging like that!

YAY! page claim (again!)
xD

i dont want it to end yet and mikey is so....ugh! hes so fucking crazy!
love poes tell-tale heart read it in 8th grade
when mikey was talking i almost felt sorry for him, keyword almost
*sigh* i still cant believe how fucking crazy mikey is :(