Going Alone - Comments

Sad that you never finished this.
The first installment kind of started out entirely cliche but then I really got into it. I was sad with the way it ended. So in a way... I like cliche but not too cliche I guess since I didn't like the way it ended.
I'm happy you wrote a sequel to it though. Funny how the repercussions worked. Like she still got stuck with the pregnancy even though it kind of happened before she even got sent into that alternate universe? That was kind of bogus. But she got a cute baby out of it I guess, and I guess without that factor you would've had to think of another sequel idea.
I don't really like how it went from an Alex story to more of a Jack story though. With where you last updated, it was leaning more towards Alex again but I felt it was kind of lame how he wasn't there for the birth. And how Jack cut the baby's cord, but he's not even the father. Kind of... sad. But I guess good if you're a Jack fan? Idk.
But anyway, I'm commenting because I just wanted to let you know I stumbled across this and enjoyed both installments regardless of the frustrations with the change up in this sequel. lol. It's still a great story and deserves to see an ending. Maybe you'll see this comment and it'll inspire you to write again? But I can understand losing inspiration or just not having the time to write now. It has been a while since you last posted for it.
But regardless, I will hold on to some hope. I will be here if you choose to ever continue. :)

I love this story!

It's amazing!

Can't wait for more!

<3

I've been missing this story :(
I hope you can write soon?

I like this a lot, Alex makes me laugh when it comes to his foolishness with babies, haha.
Update soon please :)

Not a moment sooner I heard Marshall spit up and Alex shriek.

haha i hate burping babies! i feed them not burp them!

loved itt

haha for some reason i can imagine Alex burping a baby

A new chapter :D
I was wondering where you got off to..
Good luck with your classes :)

love the update, as always....im kinda hoping that alex comes around and starts i dont know stop being such an ass and acutally care about other people. maybe marshall will change him for the better? :D update soon. congrats on the job. good luck with classes and such. i know how u feel about being busy. i havent updated anything in over a month! keep it up.

love the update :D

HAHA !
Good update
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update please!!! alex shrieking!!! lol
XD

funny ! [=

cute
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aww yay! i smiled this whole chapter =]
and haha i loved this line: She smiled and nodded, walking out of the kitchen, presumably to race after Rian and convince him to make a baby with her.

haha i pictured it in my head and started laughing. and aww Marshall gets to spend his 1st night home with both parents! =]

Congrats on the new jobbiee, and i'm excited for the next chapter, i hope something happens, im turning to team alex again :D

it is not sucky!!!!

"I don’t want to break him on the first day." :D
I'm so happy that Alex is coming around, as sad as that may seem.
Good luck with your job :)

"presumably to race after Rian and convince him to make a baby with her."<----hahahaha

love the update, yeay the baby is home :D

Aww, that was so cute! update soon... Where are you working now... i so need a job, ugh!
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