Holding Hands - Comments

yay! end story!
victory and loss.
cant wait till you update the sequel

Aww. that was sweet.
<3!!
can't wait for the sequel.

oh I love it. That was a perfect ending. XD

That was a really nice way to end this. It was gentle and tender and loving. It really worked for this story. Can't wait for Bicker Boys. It would be fantastic if the first chapter where out tonight, but only if it's ready to be posted. Thanks for sharing this fantastic story with us! <3

YAY!!!!! He's going to jail!!! I would so be doing a happy dance right now if my sibling's weren't in the room too. Oh what the heck, they already think I'm crazy, I don't disagree. Can't wait for the last chapter. Going to check out the sequel as soon as I finish writing this. Hope to be reading more soon! <3

lol. i have subscribed to the sequel! YAY!
one more chapter to go? sounds good.
im not sure im liking the description on the Biker boys story though <3

Aww, it's soo cute!! i'm really glad that the yuckface teacher was sentenced to life, although I would almost prefer the spoon digging his throat out. But again, that's slightly sadistic . . . okay, really sadistic, but it's not like he doesn't deserve it.
They're soo cute!! Sequel!! yay!!

YES!!!!! He's finally been arrested! Thanks for the update! Hope there's more soon! <3

love love love! the douche finally got arrested! thank you!

Errors:

"We had told the others that Michael was in hospital." It should be "in the hospital".

"Of cause I am." I do not know if it is because of where you are from, but to me it should be "of course I am."

"I leaped up from me seat and..." It should be "I leaped up from my seat..."

That was a gorgeous chapter! It was so adorkable and I am so glad that fucker got what he deserved >:)...he can go burn in Hell.

(EVIL LAUGH!!!) take that jerkface!! :P!!! You're caught and now there's no escape for you douchebag!!! I personally think that he should be slowly tortured by fire until death. . .. . yeah, that sounds pretty good.
Sorry, I have a deepset hatred for that man. I really like that police officer, he's a good guy. :D!!

yay! Finally he told someone that wasn't a douche! yay!

finally a police man that believes them!

YAY for good police!

Poor Micks!! I'm glad that he finally told the truth though. He needs some relief and someone needs to nail that teacher. Ahhh!! he makes me soo angry.
I'm glad that Mick's parents are so supportive and that Jack was there for him :D!! (again)

This stupid teacher is really getting on my nerves. Seriously, how much do you have to mess with someone's mental state until you feel good about yourself for doing something that's so vile and disgusting youself.
If the police don't do anything this time then I'm seriously going to start throwing things aroudn my room. I'm almost crying right now. :(
annoyed.
I hope everything is going to be okay. poor Michael. :(. I'm really glad that Jack is there for him.

oh my lord. [my words out loud]
everything gets better right?
i dont think i could take it if anything worse happened to Michael

Errors: "He stopped the car and got." Got what?
"You boyfriend hates you and your friends laugh at you." It should be 'your'.
"come on sweetie." 'come' should be capitalized.
"The ghost jack smiled sadly at me." 'jack' should be capitalized.
"No. doesn’t leave me." Okay there should be a come between 'no' and 'doesn't. 'dosen't' should don't.
"They glanced my way, they didn’t even stop, They didn’t even see me." There should be a period between 'way' and 'They'. There should also be period between 'stop' and 'They'.
"Michael love, everything going to be ok." You can either make it ", everything will be okay' or 'everything's going to be okay.'

Stupid fucking police better do something about this! They cannot just wait around waving donuts and porn magazines around. He better get better.

I hope the ambulance gets there quick. The police had better believe them now and get that bastard and lock him away. The police owe them a formal apology. Please update again soon! <3

awww poor michael. i hope jack saves him and cuts that teacher's balls off ^_^