First and foremost, I apologize for the late comment, and secondly, I really appreciate you joining the contest, Ate Ninzy.
Oh, let's quit the formalities and let's get to business! I love the picture at the beginning, though it wasn't your material, it added a very elegant touch to everything!
You really did incorporated the song, Paper Heart, at your story. Kind of sad that the girl would go down to something so low like that, having revenge for the boy, when she could just forgive him and live happily ever after.
But adding that, the plot would become too generic and stick-like, with no twists nor turns. So overall, the girl ditching the boy brought a sense of reality to everything, because that would be something a normal, heartbroken girl would do.
And please, don't tell me that this is about CNG? Or maybe, the guy from Matthew? Last year? Never mind him, he's a jerk anyway. :D
And, the mention of Dan in your story? Ahaha. That made me giggle. And yeah, if you typed this first in Microsoft Word, at the lower left hand side, there's this Word-Count, that automatically calculates the words you have used. I'm sorry you had to go through all of that counting. You should've just asked me how to do Word-Count, but that's okay. :D
Marvelous job, Ate Ninzy. I told you you had it in you. You just have to let it go, and let the talent gush in! Or maybe out? :D
I wish you good luck, God Bless. The winners will be posted soon.
Oh, let's quit the formalities and let's get to business!
I love the picture at the beginning, though it wasn't your material, it added a very elegant touch to everything!
You really did incorporated the song, Paper Heart, at your story. Kind of sad that the girl would go down to something so low like that, having revenge for the boy, when she could just forgive him and live happily ever after.
But adding that, the plot would become too generic and stick-like, with no twists nor turns. So overall, the girl ditching the boy brought a sense of reality to everything, because that would be something a normal, heartbroken girl would do.
And please, don't tell me that this is about CNG? Or maybe, the guy from Matthew? Last year? Never mind him, he's a jerk anyway. :D
And, the mention of Dan in your story? Ahaha. That made me giggle.
And yeah, if you typed this first in Microsoft Word, at the lower left hand side, there's this Word-Count, that automatically calculates the words you have used. I'm sorry you had to go through all of that counting. You should've just asked me how to do Word-Count, but that's okay. :D
Marvelous job, Ate Ninzy. I told you you had it in you. You just have to let it go, and let the talent gush in! Or maybe out? :D
I wish you good luck, God Bless.
The winners will be posted soon.