Eating Disorders; They'll Get The Best Of You - Comments

This story reminds me of Winter girls by Laurie Halse Anderson. Good story. ^^

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3rd Place: A banner of your choice; I'll post a link to a story of your choice on my profile; one comment on a story of your choice.
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Wow.
You grasped the picture completely, I thought it was the hardest image, but you did an amazing job. I really liked it, you are a great writer.

I thought this was a great, honest piece.
It was descriptive in the right places, but had a good mix of dialogue and flowed really nicely.

I got surprised that she vomited blood instead of the food.
It takes awhile for something like this to... evolve, but it does happen.

Great job!

I loved it. You've done the feelings that she's going through just about perfectly. I think you might just win this contest. :)

I really liked your story! (:
I got surprised that she vomited blood instead of the food.
I honestly think your contest entry is better than mine, haha.

This was really good.

First off I loved the picture, and I would have loved to have been assigned something like that. Instead of the lame ones I usually get :P

You used the picture very well, and I have to say that I really liked how she got help at the end of it. I also like how you sort of left the ending open. I mean, yeah she got help, but, will she stick with it? Will she pull through her struggle with bulimia? I think that was the perfect way to end it, good job!