Halloween - Comments

I love how you let us get to know the charactrers by their thoughts/actons, and not by telling their whole life story and then begin the story :P
you are seriously amazing!

Aha! That was great! :)
You are seriously an amazing writer!

Okay, this is definitely one of my favorites.

And the janitor guy saw them after their sexytime?
Mhm, embarrassing I'd say.

ha ah that was really good! i just noticed i have a hole in my pants in the crotch area....

I bow to you.
For I am not worthy to view this incredible level of sexiness.
(:

I loved the end. Haha

Oh fuck man that was awesome!
I so love the way you described Frank's costume, it was just so great!
And the end made me scream too, it was so unexpectedly expected.
This totally deserves a sequel!

Okay, I'll re-read and then comment as I go :D

I loved how you just jumped right into the story instead of being all like "Frank Iero is...blah blah".
And then as I continued reading I understood more and more and it really built a picture in my head of the character Frank. He is awesome :)
And I love how he just simply LOVES Halloween :D
And he went through a lot of work to get his costume just right, which is kinda creepy and sweet at the same time.
The thing about taking the janitors elevator made me laugh for some weird reason. Probably because I've always wanted to do that myself at our school xD (taking the elevator, not fucking in it)
Aww, and I felt so sorry for Frank when he panicked in the elevator D: And to top it of he was there with the halloween hater. Which you introduse us to as you go along.
Your description of Frank's panic attack was so good that I felt for a moment as if I couldn't breathe myself, and when Gerard had the lighter I really sighed in relief :P
And then comes their conversation which just fits prefectly to the story :D I love how they hate eachother and then something ridiculous like Frank's torn jeans turns the story in a whole other direction xD
Which I'm not even gonna say anything about because you should know by now that it's good :P

And then the ending xD I nearly pissed myself laughing xD Poor janitor. Probably not what he wanted to see when he opened the elevator again :P

Brilliant work! I'm all exited for Halloween now!
Thanks for posting this early too :D

I really liked this story, especially the ending =P
Happy almost Halloween ;D

I just had to take this story's comment virginity... so consider it taken xD
I will write a much longer detailed comment tomorrow! :D