DANNNIIIII! get better with your writting or i will disown you. not that your skills are bad, just the format you write in. as in, use the assigned one for mibba so your story doesn't get banned. :P and yay! i got mentioned. but i think that's cause im the only one who comments. haha
Holy crap! This is amazing! xD I don't believe I've read a better story on Mibba yet. You have amazing description but it's not too much to become overwelming. The story line is also very intense and dark; I like it. I do hope though, after this chapter that you and your co-writer decide to describe the characters personality more and more throughout the story. Keep it up :D
Woo! First comment! This is an amazing story so far! I love the fact that you have everything in this; death, love, revenge, slash, violence, power, and histroy. It's amazing! Please continue! I can't wait to read Dani's first chapter!