im frustrated by the fact that theyre a little too hateful i hate how avery just dumped her when in truth you dont go telling ur bf bout ur entire dating history secondly alex was never a dick and if he really loved her like you wrote it out then he should have been depressed and probably later pissed and bitter like he is but if she confronts him he should be mad and scream at first but end up crying and being all "i loved you holly i loved you then and i love you now and thats why i hate you because no matter how much i wanna get you out of my heart i cant " lol somethin like that
holy shit is this still an all time low fan fic? and wth what bitches i was going to say she should do something jurastic but then the susspense would kill me waiting of rthe next chapter like it is now and ...wow alex is a bitch claudias a bitch zack a bitch their all bastards! hehe update soom :)
Ohhh boy. Claudia, really? I completely understand how mad she was at Holly but if you're that mad at someone, you don't go asking them for favors. She's just using Holly even though she doesn't plan on forgiving her. Urggg. And Alex! Good God, man, why did you have to do that?
I hope you get everything all sorted out, love! Update was awesome :)
The update was wonderful.... but really Avery can't forgive what happened so long ago? and Claudia has a baby with someone she hates? Could it be a certain ATL boy? or the Ex? and we still have the unsolved mystery of the egging. its so .... edge of seat dramatic. I can't wait for the next chapter!
^ AGREED LOL anyways that was such a messed up update, BUT IN A GOOD WAY! haha, UGHH I can't believe Avery just turned his back on her! I was actually hoping that he'd stay with her! I TOTALLY despise Alex, the freaking douche! I hope she doesn't end up with his jerkass. And Claudia can go die in a hole with her demon baby. Loved it as per usual, can't wait for the next one :D
it has to be the atl boys im thinking zach wasn't in on it. and when they see how horrible she looks all abused and what not. they are gonna be walking down guilt lane! but thats just my opinion:p keep it going its wonderful, seriously! more more more!x)
o3o and then holly snapped, went out and bought a gun, and killed everyone becoming the most famous person in history! The End! ^^ oh yea~ i got this story figured out! {Note Sarcasm} <333
Oh my God! Fucking douchebags! I'm going for the obvious guess that it was Zack and Alex. But who knows. You're probably going to throw us for a loop next time. SOOOOOOOON XD
thats crazy. at east john was cool and helped her out, even after everything he knows. thats a TRUE FRIEND. its sweet too. it could have been avery, if he didnt tell the truth about all theATL boys told him, but he doesnt strike me as that kind of person. Claudia could've done it, she was angry when she woke up, bu the girls were being nice to each other. the atl boys seem to be the logical suspects, but who knows?! Can't wait to see the next chap.
I was totally Alex. I feel so bad for Holly! Those douches better get what they deserve. And John was a total sweetheart about the whole thing. His mom is awesome.
I'm gonna throw caution to the wind here and go out on a limb. I think the ATL boys might have had something to do with it. And if that's not the case, well, I tried x]
PLEASE update soon! Oh my god, whoever did that to Holly is just plain cruel, and I'd like to give them a piece of my mind, I have a few people popping up in my head but I don't want to guess and be wrong haha